You DESPERATELY need to shrink the fullview image. Anyways, it's pretty good, and I like the color choice. Noone's perfect, so don't let my critiques bother you, but please do heed them. You need to be a bit cleaner with your inking lines, though you manage to keep them fairly clean. You might want to try varying line thickness to emphasize perspective or size of things, it can really make a good jump in the picture's impact. Also, I would have used different pencils for her outfit and hair, as the black blends a bit too much and looks odd. You've got a good grasp on the "shiny" hair, and using shading to create clothing folds. also, you should work on your eyes more. Look at pictures for reference, and Google "Julie Dillon Anime Eye Tutorial" for a really great article about anime eye creation.

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Sorry.

I didn't feel like shrinking the full-size image.

I only own one pen.

I like my eye style.

I did use different pencils. But those are /HIS/ set colors.

Thank you for your critique, I guess. I'll take your opinions into consideration.

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Sorry.

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